What I want to know is...
How have you guys not been picked up by a TV network? Your cartoons are so much more entertaining than most of the stuff that ends up on TV these days.
A halloween monster that eats almost anything and poops out candy. What's not to love?
Gotta love it. Although how sanitary is the candy? Stay tuned
Well done, but...
It was well done, but there were a few things of note:
-The file size was huge for how short the flash itself was. Maybe start reading up on how to reduce your file size.
-There were a few animated spots (ie. the laser eyes) that just seemed like you got lazy. While it may not seem like much, those small spots detract from the beautifully drawn rest of the animation.
-A little more story-line and development would bring so much more depth. Why are there doodles? Were they drawn and went rogue? Why is our 'hero' fighting them? Etc.
A great start - keep up the good work. I think you have a nice style that with a little practice and tuning could go a long way.
Mhmm i shall! im going to look for tuts and books on how to make it look better thnks alot !! :)
The piece you submitted to NG is amazing. Very real. I'll be honest, when watching the full video on youtube with the second section I didn't like it as much... it may have been inspirational but it didn't have the power and emotion that the first part of the video does.
Just my very humble opinion, though! :) And seriously, the first part, the one that's on NG... very wonderful.
Thanks! The first part was the one I originally intended on being the entire movie but I felt it was a tad depressing and didn't wanna leave the viewer feeling negative. In a way I guess I did both by submitting one version another in Youtube.
Anywayz thanks so much for your honest opinion and really glad you could leave a review :)
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